Hi Aubrey, I really like the way you did a lot of research and then wrote it with your own words, but just a suggestion, maybe you could add pictures and make your words a bit bigger. Other than that I like your slideshow and enjoyed it.
Hi Aubrey,I'm Sachary from St. Patricks School,I like your slide because it really helped others know more about the World War,And it looks like you did a really great job on your research about this,Keep It Up!.
Hi Aubrey,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you did a lot of research and then wrote it with your own words, but just a suggestion, maybe you could add pictures and make your words a bit bigger. Other than that I like your slideshow and enjoyed it.
Hi Aubrey,I'm Sachary from St. Patricks School,I like your slide because it really helped others know more about the World War,And it looks like you did a really great job on your research about this,Keep It Up!.
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ReplyDeleteIts a good thing you are talking about ANZAC day because it is about celebrating those who have passed in the world war