In our writing:
WALT: write a descriptive paragraph of a character
using all of their senses to include exciting verbs, colourful adjectives, similes and metaphors.
Success Criteria:
- have used the framework to describe a character
- have used all of the senses
- included exciting verbs, colourful adjectives, and similes and metaphors.
- have four paragraphs to describe my character.
- can write five sentences in each paragraph.
Uncle Albert
My uncle is not shy. He is scary to other people but not to me. He gets angry when people drive up his driveway and they are not there for him. My uncle speaks with a deep voice.
He has a quad bike. It is always muddy and he is a funny uncle. He has dirty pigs that run in a block of mud. He shoots pigs and birds that fly around his pigsty. His skin is as white as a light. When he walks, he always skims and scuffs the heels of his gumboots across the ground. He always has to wear his gumboots. Most of the time he wears his gumboots and his white Nikey sandals. When he moves he moves really fast, but only when he needs too.
He always give me hunting gears and always lets me go with him on the farm.
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